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以下是上海环球雅思小编为大家整理的托福写作词语表达,希望可以帮助到大家的学习,详细见以下具体:
新托福写作应该如何提高?作为一门国外类的考试的一部分,写作时候的用词表达就非常重要。恰当而富有特色的表达往往能够增加词汇的鲜活力。我们常常在看老外的文章时会发现,他们的一篇文章用,名词出现的概率相当的高。不仅如此,对名词喜爱的程度更是到了把动词都要名词化,而且经常性的使用抽象名词,因此在写作时,如果能够投其所好,自然能够得到加分。
简单说,名词化即是动词或形容词被用作名词的现象。比如动词转成名词:discovery->discovery, move->movement, refuse->refusal,又比如形容词转成名词:careless->carelessness, difficult->difficulty, intense->intensity.那么什么情况下,我们需要进行名词化呢?
a.谓语动词的宾语部分
原句:i do not know either what she meant or what he intends.
名词化:i do not know either her meaning or his intentions.
b.结合被动形式
原句:if people decide without enough persuasive information,…
名词化:if a decision is made without enough persuasive information,…
c.取代诸如从句中“the fact that”的用法
原句:the fact that i denied what he accused me of impressed the jury.
名词化:my denial of his accusations impressed the jury.
更好的名词化:a. when i denied his accusations, i impressed the jury.
b. in denying his accusations, i impressed the jury.
d.名词化部分用在there is/are的后面
原句:we demand that the government stop taxing entertainment.
名词化:there is a demand for an end to taxation on entertainment.
原句:the floods considerably eroded the land.
名词化:there was considerable erosion of the land from the floods.
然而,有些时候,在我们的新托福写作方式中认为理所应当使用“名词化”时,老外认为是没有必要的。比如:
a. 名词化部分跟在动词后面
原句(名词化“冗余”):the police conducted an investigation into the matter.
改后:the police investigated the matter.
b.名词化部分作为主语
原句:our discussion is concerned with a tax cut.
改后:we discussed a tax cut.
c.连续进行名词化
原句:a. first, she reviewed the evolution of the dorsal fin.
b. there was a first a review of the evolution of the dorsal fin.
改后:first, she reviewed how the dorsal fin evolved.
d.连接部分名词化
原句:their cessation of hostilities was because of their personnel losses.
改后:they ceased hostilities because they lost personnel.
原句:the instability of the motor housing did not preclude the completion of the field trials.
改后:even though the motor housing was unstable, the research staff completed the field trials.
因为中国的传统习惯是在组句中以动词为主,因此在新托福写作的过程中,如何转到地道的表达对大家来说可能是一件比较困难的一件事,不过任何事情只要做了,就有可能发生。相信同学们勤加苦练必然能有所收获。
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